Forest Girl

There once was a girl from Orygun
Whose head would at times come undone.
Then a hollow container
Made her a light painter
And now she always has fun.

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Geeky Bits:
Camera: Zero 4×5 (24mm configuation)
Film: Illford Delta 100
Exposure time: 10 minutes

Today’s Poetry 201 assignment was a Limerick about something imperfect using enjambment. This was a hard assignment. I’ve never written a Limerick before – and it was harder than I imagined it would be. I also wanted to make it work with my photo for the day, which was a challenge. I just wasn’t able to manage theΒ enjambment part. I may rework it at a later time, just for the challenge.

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8 responses to “Forest Girl – A Limerick”

  1. schlem Avatar
    schlem

    Achievement Unlocked!

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  2. writersdream9 Avatar

    It just plays in your mind, huh? πŸ™‚ Very good.

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    1. Moni Avatar

      yep – it’s been driving me nuts – the rhythm! I’m glad I got it out of my head finally :). Thanks for reading! πŸ™‚ And for the kind words! πŸ™‚

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  3. Misky Avatar

    Love this. Great fun.

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    1. Moni Avatar

      Thank you! πŸ™‚

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    1. Moni Avatar

      Thank you very much! πŸ˜€

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